Would like some reviews.  It's up on soundcloud.  Lyrics are on the SC page.

Thanks.

Here:

https://soundcloud.com/big_east/breaking-bad-demo

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I listened to it and overall I like the song. Two things came to mind; first you may not want to make reference to the TV show. You can not copyright a title. But if you say if related to the show they may want to claim you are violating their trademark. The songs itself stands on its own the verses do not relate to the show. They other thing is lead break need a stronger solo on it. Right now its just empty space. Overall its a good song!

Hey James, I like your song ! Nice work!

 I will admit that the double-spacing between the lines of lyric in the verses began to make me feel just a tad antsy. It's as if the line would get me up listening and interested, then drop me back for a rest break before giving me more, over and over. I wanted it to get me up and keep me up. Even so, it still seemed to work..

Also, I was looking for a killer chorus to go with this song, such as giving us some examples of how you are "breaking bad" : Breaking bad like a something something something, Breaking bad like a something something something..then another line of lyric ending with a rhyme for "bad", then finish with "After all we had, I'm breaking bad".

The only other thing is that you said that this is a "demo". Speaking from a song publisher viewpoint, I would be tempted to fast forward the song rather than go through long guitar breaks in middle. However, if you are using the demo to demonstrate to a certain band the way the song is to be played all the way through, then yes, this would work very well.

Overall, it's a good song and I love the rock feel to it! Great vocals, too!

 

 

 

I think the song is excellent and a strong lead guitar presence will dramatically improve the power and backbone of this song.

Really liked that song as it is actually. Best wishes. Tiki

LIke the song very much - it rock's.  The right lead guitar solo will only elevate it.

Definitely has "commercial potential".  Reminds me of a TV theme soundtrack - aka "The Heat is On".

Great analysis!



Linne Black said:

Hey James, I like your song ! Nice work!

 I will admit that the double-spacing between the lines of lyric in the verses began to make me feel just a tad antsy. It's as if the line would get me up listening and interested, then drop me back for a rest break before giving me more, over and over. I wanted it to get me up and keep me up. Even so, it still seemed to work..

Also, I was looking for a killer chorus to go with this song, such as giving us some examples of how you are "breaking bad" : Breaking bad like a something something something, Breaking bad like a something something something..then another line of lyric ending with a rhyme for "bad", then finish with "After all we had, I'm breaking bad".

The only other thing is that you said that this is a "demo". Speaking from a song publisher viewpoint, I would be tempted to fast forward the song rather than go through long guitar breaks in middle. However, if you are using the demo to demonstrate to a certain band the way the song is to be played all the way through, then yes, this would work very well.

Overall, it's a good song and I love the rock feel to it! Great vocals, too!

 

 

 

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